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Post  imevil on Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:58 pm

i know i havent been accepted as a writer, but i have a new script that we could use. this is only the beggening. if you want ill continue. if not, i wont.

[i]The scene zooms into the stage hyrule temple. wolf is hiding at the bottom. Fox, Mario and Link are at the top.[/i]
Wolf: Now!
[i]Bowser and Wario jump down from above. A battle begins. Wolf comes up to fight but is immediately knocked off by Wario.[/i]
Wolf (as falling): Wario, you trader
Bowser: Nice job yell
Mario: So you guys are with us?
Bowser: No!
[i]Link jumps from above but gets hit by Bowser.[/i]
[i]1 Month Before[/i]
[i]Mario is at Luigis Mansion, Luigi appears.[/i]
Luigi: What-up bro.
Mario: Well Roy is still in melee and he's sending me e-mails to help him get here. I tell him he's a noob.
Luigi: Well, his fault, he's only in Japan.
Mario: What about Marth.
Luigi: Well, Marth is cool though.
Mario: True, Roy is a loser. What about the doc?
Luigi: He is a wannabee.
Mario: True dat!
Luigi: Your so white it's not funny
Mario: Hey, don' hate
Luigi: Whatever, you hungry. I'll go get some pizza.
[i]The scene shifts to Wario Ware. Where Link and Fox are there not fighting but completing the tasks. [/i]
Fox: This new interactive game is better than the wii
Link: I know.
Link forgets to jump and loses. The scene goes to Luigis mansion which is now fox, link and falco's house.
Fox: Yeah, I win
Falco: Sup all
Link: Sup Fal
Falco: Ya'll hungry.
Link: Yeah!
[i]The Scene shifts to ness's stage with the drug store and everything. Luigi and Falco are both there. They both see each other on top of the drug store.[/i]
Luigi: Hey, your the guy with horrible fashion sense.
Falco: Hey, your the Mario wannabee
Luigi: Hey, not cool.
[i]Bowser and Wario come out of nowhere and kidnap them both.[/i]

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Re: new script i wrote

Post  Rotnpankake on Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:40 am

what i said from the other *accidental* post

why did this go off topic? anyway, if we're looking for original, spoofs aren't the way to go. there are a LOT of spoofs on everything. The best way to go would be an original series that has nothing to do with anything else. the crew's writers should brainstorm some ideas then branch off the best one.

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Post  and1mastah on Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:43 am

that is why we are creating nad brainstorming ideas right now if you read some more

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Post  and1mastah on Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:45 pm

it sound like a real world but done in ssbb

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Post  imevil on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:16 pm

[quote:2979="and1mastah"]it sound like a real world but done in ssbb[/quote]
that good or bad

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Post  and1mastah on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:23 pm

the script is good...but lets see how you produce it

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Re: new script i wrote

Post  imevil on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:37 pm

this might be a noob question,but what do you mean by produce. continue on?


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Post  and1mastah on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:48 pm

[quote:e43b="imevil"]this might be a noob question,but what do you mean by produce. continue on?[/quote]

like act it out, edit it, etc...

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Post  imevil on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:50 pm

episode 2

The Scene shifts to Luigi's mansion. which is now Luigi's house.
Mario(in head): I'm getting hungry, where's Luigi. Its been like an hour. I'll call him.
Mario walks into another room. The scene shifts to Ness stage where you can here a phone ringing.
The scene shifts back to Luigi's mansion which is now Link, Falco and Fox's house. Fox and Link are just standing there talking when Fox says
Fox: Where's Falco with the food.
Link: Yeah, its been days now
Fox: Shut-up Link its been an hour. But still where is he.
Link: We should call him
Fox: Yeah, I'll do that
Fox walks into another room. The scene shifts to ness stage again, where you here a ringing phone. The Scene shifts to mosses island where Falco and Luigi are on the side. There being guarded by Gannondorf. Luigi is scared but Falco tries to comfort him.
Falco: Dude, stop. I know your brother he's very tough and will come to your rescue. And my two bros. will come get me. and ill bring you to.
Luigi: Are you sure.
Gannondorf: SILENCE FOOLS!
Wario walks in
Wario: My shift
Gannondorf: All-right, peace yell
Falco: Do you have that nickname cause he yells a lot?
Gannondorf: No, he's yellow you idiot.
Luigi: That makes sense
Gannondorf: Silence you insolent green idiot.
Luigi: Sorry
Gannondorf: SILENCE!!!!!
Gannondorf leaves the room. the scene shifts to ness's stage. where fox and link have just arrived.
Fox: This is his favorite spot, where could he be
Link: Don't know
Mario comes looking for Luigi
Mario: Luigi, where are you. Luigi. Hey, you two seen Luigi
Link: The green guy who looks like you
Mario: Yup
Link: No, sorry dude. Have you seen Falco. Guy with a Falco on head
Mario: Maybe
Link: What?
Mario: Maybe i have, maybe not.
Fox kicks Mario
Fox: Just answer, yes or no. Have you seen my brother.
Mario: Your brother? and is Link your bro. too
Fox: Yeah, SO!
Mario: How is a dorf...
Link: Hey it's elf noob
Mario: ok ELF, fox and falcon brothers.
Link: Long story, I'll tell you though. Pretty much my mom, Zelda and my Dad, Cloud Fox had two kids . Me and Fox. Fox remarried with Capitan Falco, and they had my brother Falco.
Mario: That's a noob story
Link slashes Mario
Link: Hey, its true
Ness comes out from a store
Ness: What's the commotion out here.
Link: Have you seen Falco and Luigi.
Ness: Falco and Luigi, huh? Well, I remember a giant turtle out here with Mario. But Mario was wearing yellow. They were with Falco and Luigi.
Fox and Link look toward Mario
Mario: Hey, you said yellow right
Ness: Yup
Mario: It probably was Wario
Ness: Who
Fox: He's a new character, Mario's cousin.
Link: Well were sure about who the turtle is
All three at once: Bowser!

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Post  and1mastah on Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:57 pm

remember to vote!


also...remember that you can only have 4 people on a map at once on ssbb

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Re: new script i wrote

Post  imevil on Wed Jul 01, 2009 10:41 am

[quote:0ab0="and1mastah"]remember to vote!


also...remember that you can only have 4 people on a map at once on ssbb[/quote]
yeah , i know. i trying to do that. but also, if at a time there is five or six. we could do a map switch. ex: at the beggining 6 people are at hyrule. but after wolf says now. he's unneeded for a second. we could switch maps to only show Wario,Bowser,Mario and Link (Fox isnt really doing anything). But when wolf comes up, take out mario and add wolf, when wolf ghets knocked off, switch again. to make this easier, we could tape both times with Wario,Bowser,Mario and Link at the same time.

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Post  imevil on Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:33 pm

The scene shifts to mosses island where Bowser and Wario are there talking
Wario: You sure you want to do this
Bowser: Yes, that's the only reason we agreed to this. That's the only way we could get contact with him. Remember when Wolf found out about Ike's friendship with Mario when he used to work here.
Wario: Oh, yeah
Bowser: So how will we contact him without boss seeing.
Wario: Next time I'm on guard alone I'll take to him about the plan. Okay.
Bowser: Okay.
The scene shifts to Ness's stage where Mario has received a call. It's a restricted number.
Fox: Put it on speaker
Mario: Why? It's a prank call
Fox: Just do it
Mario: Okay
A voice is heard from the phone
Phone Voice: I know who you are Mario. I know your situation also. I can tell you where Luigi is.
Fox: What about Falco?
Phone Voice: Yes, he's with Luigi. They were kidnapped by Bowser and Wario, right in the spot your standing
Link: Who are you, why are you helping us?
Fox: And what's the price for this information
Phone Voice: No price. Just wanna help
Mario: Why? I know this world. Nothing comes free
Phone Voice: Well, this does.
The voice is now unheard and the scene is silent
Fox: Who is he?
Mario: How does he know my number?
Link: How does he know us, or Luigi and Falco. And how does he no they were kidnapped. And how did he know where we are at this exact second.

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Post  imevil on Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:14 pm

Episode Four

The scene shifts to the ship which is now Bowser and Wario and Gannondorf's living quarters. Wario and Bowser are there. Wolf walks in with Marth.
Wolf: Guys, welcome in the new guard, Marth
Bowser: Wazzup
Wario: Welcome to the team.
Marth: Hi guys
Wolf: Come on, let's go meet Gannondorf
Wolf and Marth leave the room
Bowser: Another enemy
Wario: Well, this guy doesn't look to tough. The sword is his only weapon. He doesn't look to smart to me.
Bowser: True
The scene shifts to Mosses Island where Luigi and Falco are in the corner, Gannondorf is on guard. Marth walks in.
Marth: Hi... Gannon right?
Gannondorf: Yes, right. And your Ike right
Marth: No, Marth
Gannondorf: Oh, what you want
Marth: Wolf told me to help you guard
Gannondorf: Ok, stand over in the corner
Marth: I thought I was supposed to help you guard
Gannondorf: Just go!
Gannondorf attacks Marth, throwing him into the wall
Marth: You know what, I hate it here. I QUIT!
Gannondorf: Good
Marth leaves and Gannondorf turns toward the prisoners.
Falco: What?
Gannondorf: What What?
Falco: What What What?
Luigi: SHUSH
Gannondorf: What?
Gannondorf attacks Luigi
Luigi: OWW!
Gannondorf: That's what you get!
Falco: Hey, cut him some slack.
Gannondorf: Shut-up
The scene shifts back to the ship Wolf and Marth are standing next to each other
Wolf: You sure, its only your first day?
Marth: I hate Gannon, he goes or I go
Wolf: Come on
Marth: No, good-bye
Marth walks away
The scene shifts to Luigi's Mansion. Which is Mari's house now. Ness, Link ,Fox and Mario are sitting there
Mario: Who could this guy possibly be. Someone who knows us and has been following us
Ness: Someone who also has some sort of friendship with you to give you free info about Luigi and Falco.
Fox: We think its free. Who knows want he really wants from us.
The phone rings again
Link: put on speaker Mario
Mario: Hello, this you
Phone Voice: Yes its me. I have more info.
Fox: First tell us who you really are.
Phone Voice: Do you want the info?
Mario: Yes we do
Phone Voice: Ok, I'll be texting the address of both the living HQ of the Nappers and the address of the prison your friends are in.
Link: Ok, we will hang up, then send it.
Phone Voice: Wait, one more thing.
Fox: What your price?
Phone Voice: No, you want to know who I am right. Well, we could meet

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Post  imevil on Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:04 am

ok, i fineshed this thing. heres the whole script. dotteds lines seperate episodes
1&2


The scene zooms into the stage hyrule temple. wolf is hiding at the bottom. Fox, Mario and Link are at the top.
Wolf: Now!
Bowser and Wario jump down from above. A battle begins. Wolf comes up to fight but is immediately knocked off by Wario.
Wolf (as falling): Wario, you trader
Bowser: Nice job yell
Mario: So you guys are with us?
Bowser: No!
Link jumps from above but gets hit by Bowser.
1 Month Before
Mario is at Luigis Mansion, Luigi appears.
Luigi: What-up bro.
Mario: Well Roy is still in melee and he's sending me e-mails to help him get here. I tell him he's a noob.
Luigi: Well, his fault, he's only in Japan.
Mario: What about Marth.
Luigi: Well, Marth is cool though.
Mario: True, Roy is a loser. What about the doc?
Luigi: He is a wannabee.
Mario: True dat!
Luigi: Your so white it's not funny
Mario: Hey, don' hate
Luigi: Whatever, you hungry. I'll go get some pizza.
The scene shifts to Wario Ware. Where Link and Fox are there not fighting but completing the tasks.
Fox: This new interactive game is better than the wii
Link: I know.
Link forgets to jump and loses. The scene goes to Luigis mansion which is now fox, link and falco's house.
Fox: Yeah, I win
Falco: Sup all
Link: Sup Fal
Falco: Ya'll hungry.
Link: Yeah!
The Scene shifts to ness's stage with the drug store and everything. Luigi and Falco are both there. They both see each other on top of the drug store.
Luigi: Hey, your the guy with horrible fashion sense.
Falco: Hey, your the Mario wannabee
Luigi: Hey, not cool.
Bowser and Wario come out of nowhere and kidnap them both.
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The Scene shifts to Luigi's mansion. which is now Luigi's house.
Mario(in head): I'm getting hungry, where's Luigi. Its been like an hour. I'll call him.
Mario walks into another room. The scene shifts to Ness stage where you can here a phone ringing.
The scene shifts back to Luigi's mansion which is now Link, Falco and Fox's house. Fox and Link are just standing there talking when Fox says
Fox: Where's Falco with the food.
Link: Yeah, its been days now
Fox: Shut-up Link its been an hour. But still where is he.
Link: We should call him
Fox: Yeah, I'll do that
Fox walks into another room. The scene shifts to ness stage again, where you here a ringing phone. The Scene shifts to mosses island where Falco and Luigi are on the side. There being guarded by Gannondorf. Luigi is scared but Falco tries to comfort him.
Falco: Dude, stop. I know your brother he's very tough and will come to your rescue. And my two bros. will come get me. and ill bring you to.
Luigi: Are you sure.
Gannondorf: SILENCE FOOLS!
Wario walks in
Wario: Wolf says its my shift
Gannondorf: All-right, peace yell
Falco: Do you have that nickname cause he yells a lot?
Gannondorf: No, he's yellow you idiot.
Luigi: That makes sense
Gannondorf: Silence you insolent green idiot.
Luigi: Sorry
Gannondorf: SILENCE!!!!!
Gannondorf leaves the room. the scene shifts to ness's stage. where fox and link have just arrived.
Fox: This is his favorite spot, where could he be
Link: Don't know
Mario comes looking for Luigi
Mario: Luigi, where are you. Luigi. Hey, you two seen Luigi
Link: The green guy who looks like you
Mario: Yup
Link: No, sorry dude. Have you seen Falco. Guy with a Falco on head
Mario: Maybe
Link: What?
Mario: Maybe i have, maybe not.
Fox kicks Mario
Fox: Just answer, yes or no. Have you seen my brother.
Mario: Your brother? and is Link your bro. too
Fox: Yeah, SO!
Mario: How is a dorf...
Link: Hey it's elf noob
Mario: ok ELF, fox and falcon brothers.
Link: Long story, I'll tell you though. Pretty much my mom, Zelda and my Dad, Cloud Fox had two kids . Me and Fox. Fox remarried with Capitan Falco, and they had my brother Falco.
Mario: That's a noob story
Link slashes Mario
Link: Hey, its true
Ness comes out from a store
Ness: What's the commotion out here.
Link: Have you seen Falco and Luigi.
Ness: Falco and Luigi, huh? Well, I remember a giant turtle out here with Mario. But Mario was wearing yellow. They were with Falco and Luigi.
Fox and Link look toward Mario
Mario: Hey, you said yellow right
Ness: Yup
Mario: It probably was Wario
Ness: Who
Fox: He's a new character, Mario's cousin.
Link: Well were sure about who the turtle is
All three at once: Bowser!

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Post  imevil on Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:05 am

3&4

The scene shifts to mosses island where Bowser and Wario are there talking
Wario: You sure you want to do this
Bowser: Yes, that's the only reason we agreed to this. That's the only way we could get contact with him. Remember when Wolf found out about Ike's friendship with Mario when he used to work here.
Wario: Oh, yeah
Bowser: So how will we contact him without boss seeing.
Wario: Next time I'm on guard alone I'll take to him about the plan. Okay.
Bowser: Okay.
The scene shifts to Ness's stage where Mario has received a call. It's a restricted number.
Fox: Put it on speaker
Mario: Why? It's a prank call
Fox: Just do it
Mario: Okay
A voice is heard from the phone
Phone Voice: I know who you are Mario. I know your situation also. I can tell you where Luigi is.
Fox: What about Falco?
Phone Voice: Yes, he's with Luigi. They were kidnapped by Bowser and Wario, right in the spot your standing
Link: Who are you, why are you helping us?
Fox: And what's the price for this information
Phone Voice: No price. Just wanna help
Mario: Why? I know this world. Nothing comes free
Phone Voice: Well, this does.
The voice is now unheard and the scene is silent
Fox: Who is he?
Mario: How does he know my number?
Link: How does he know us, or Luigi and Falco. And how does he no they were kidnapped. And how did he know where we are at this exact second.
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The scene shifts to the ship which is now Bowser and Wario and Gannondorf's living quarters. Wario and Bowser are there. Wolf walks in with Marth.
Wolf: Guys, welcome in the new guard, Marth
Bowser: Wazzup
Wario: Welcome to the team.
Marth: Hi guys
Wolf: Come on, let's go meet Gannondorf
Wolf and Marth leave the room
Bowser: Another enemy
Wario: Well, this guy doesn't look to tough. The sword is his only weapon. He doesn't look to smart to me.
Bowser: True
The scene shifts to Mosses Island where Luigi and Falco are in the corner, Gannondorf is on guard. Marth walks in.
Marth: Hi... Gannon right?
Gannondorf: Yes, right. And your Ike right
Marth: No, Marth
Gannondorf: Oh, what you want
Marth: Wolf told me to help you guard
Gannondorf: Ok, stand over in the corner
Marth: I thought I was supposed to help you guard
Gannondorf: Just go!
Gannondorf attacks Marth, throwing him into the wall
Marth: You know what, I hate it here. I QUIT!
Gannondorf: Good
Marth leaves and Gannondorf turns toward the prisoners.
Falco: What?
Gannondorf: What What?
Falco: What What What?
Luigi: SHUSH
Gannondorf: What?
Gannondorf attacks Luigi
Luigi: OWW!
Gannondorf: That's what you get!
Falco: Hey, cut him some slack.
Gannondorf: Shut-up
The scene shifts back to the ship Wolf and Marth are standing next to each other
Wolf: You sure, its only your first day?
Marth: I hate Gannon, he goes or I go
Wolf: Come on
Marth: No, good-bye
Marth walks away
The scene shifts to Luigi's Mansion. Which is Mario's house now. Ness, Link ,Fox and Mario are sitting there
Mario: Who could this guy possibly be. Someone who knows us and has been following us
Ness: Someone who also has some sort of friendship with you to give you free info about Luigi and Falco.
Fox: We think its free. Who knows want he really wants from us.
The phone rings again
Link: put on speaker Mario
Mario: Hello, this you
Phone Voice: Yes its me. I have more info.
Fox: First tell us who you really are.
Phone Voice: Do you want the info?
Mario: Yes we do
Phone Voice: Ok, I'll be texting the address of both the living HQ of the Nappers and the address of the prison your friends are in.
Link: Ok, we will hang up, then send it.
Phone Voice: Wait, one more thing.
Fox: What your price?
Phone Voice: No, you want to know who I am right. Well, we could meet

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Post  imevil on Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:05 am

5&6

The scene is at Luigis Mansion, where we left off before
Fox: Where, How?
Phone Voice: Yoshi's Island, tomorrow. I'll hang up now to send you the text
You here a beep sound
Mario: I got the text
Fox: Good. Me and Link will go to there. Ness, you and Mario go to meet our mystery helper
Ness: Sure
THE NEXT DAY
The Scene Shifts to Yoshi's Island which is now just outside of mosses island.
Fox: Ok, were just outside and Luigi and Falco are around here. Let's go.
Bowser and Wario come out of nowhere
Bowser: Not so fast
Wario: Your not going in
A fight began. Link fought Bowser and Fox fought Wario. Link had an upper hand against Bowser but Wario is beating Fox. Link comes over to help fox. There both attacked from behind by Bowser. They are then chased away
The scene shifts the Yoshi's Island, but it's now the real Yoshi's Island. Ness and Mario are there waiting for the mystery helper
Mario: Get ready to fight at any time
Ness: OK
Someone began to walk toward them
Ness: Are you?
Ike: Yes, it's me. Your helper.
Mario: Who are you, and why are you helping us
Ike: You know about how Zelda and Cloud Wolf had two kids, and Fox remarried with Capitan Falco, and had another kid
Mario: Yeah, so
Ike: Zelda and Cloud Fox had another kid, they thought he died when he was three, but he was kidnapped by Bowser and Wario
Mario: Your...
Ike: Yes, yes I am. I was also once captivated. But I got out. When I found out about you guys I had to help.
Ness: But why would they kidnap you guys?
Ike: Fox and Captain Falco had another kid. Wolf O'Donnell. Cloud Fox hated him and he told Falco that either they abandon the kid. Or they get a divorce. Falco picked him. Wolf was abandoned at the age of 11. He swore revenge. He's the one organizing the kidnapping's. The only other people outside of us four that know are Zelda and Falco.
Mario: Falco knows?
Ike: Yes he does. That's why the kidnapping wasn't as big of a surprise as a usual.
Ness: But what does he have against Mario and Luigi?
Ike: Nothing, Bowser and Wario had to nap him or he would tell.
Mario: So Luigi was kidnapped for being at the wrong place at the wrong time?
Ike: Yes, yes he was
Mario: Ok, this conversation is over. Keep in touch Ike. Let's go Ness
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The scene is at Mosses Island. Wario and Bowser are guarding Falco and Luigi.
Wario: Falco we need to talk
Falco: About the plan
Bowser: Yup
Luigi: What plan?
Bowser: The plan to take over
Falco: Yup, me Bowser and Wario take over the smash world.
Luigi: Your with the kidnappers
Falco: No, just these two. were goanna over take wolf
Luigi: TRADER!
Falco: Whatever
Falco, Wario and Bowser walk out. The seen shifts to Yoshi's island which is just outside of Mosses Island.
Gannondorf (unseen):So, take over huh
Gannondorf appears from above
Gannondorf: I heard it all. You traders ill kill you all
Gannondorf attacks Falco beginning a fight. Bowser hits Gannon knocking him down. Wario bites him and throws him out. Falco attacks from behind and Bowser finishes him off.
Bowser: Um, where'd he go?
Falco: Probably in Halo
Bowser: Ha! Loser
Wario: Shut-up
The scene shifts to Luigi's Mansion. Where Fox, Ness, Mario and Link are there talking
Fox: Our brother Falco knew all along?
Link: And Luigi was innocent
Mario: Yup, all true
A phone rings
Link: Speaker
Mario: Hello
Wolf (phone): So, I know about the meeting with Falcos brother
Mario: Wolf
Link: Wolf, our abandoned step bro.?
Wolf: Yes Link, It's me
Fox: What do you want. Where are Falco and Luigi?
Wolf: Well according to Bowser and Wario, you already know
Ness: Why are you calling
Wolf: Why do you care Ness, you have nothing to do with this
Ness: How do you know me?
Wolf: Oh, I know
Link: Why are you calling
Wolf: I want to make a deal
Mario: What deal
Wolf: Come to Hyrule temple in a week. Bring your friend, or brother Ike. You give me him, ill give Luigi and Falco
Link: We'll have to think about that
Wolf: You have a week to think. Call me when the decision is made.
Wolf hangs up
Mario: Lets call Ike
Mario calls Ike
Mario: Ike, Wolf is willing to give back Falco
and Luigi
Ike: Thats great. But as you guys said before. Nothings free. what doies he want
Mario: You
Ike: What
Mario: You, he wants you Ike
Ike:...I'm willing to do it
Link: What, no, will ask to give someone else. all three of us. you've helped us enough. you don't need to do this.
Ike: According everyone I'm dead anyways.
Fox: Ike, are you sure
Ike: Yes, yes I am. But I have a plan just in case its a trick

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Post  imevil on Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:06 am

7&8

The scene zooms into the stage hyrule temple. wolf is hiding at the bottom. Fox, Mario and Link are at the top.
Wolf: Now!
Bowser and Wario jump down from above. A battle begins. Wolf comes up to fight but is immediately knocked off by Wario.
Wolf (as falling): Wario, you trader
Bowser: Nice job yell
Mario: So you guys are with us?
Bowser: No!
Link jumps from above but gets hit by Bowser
Mario: If your not with us then what was that. Killing your boss?
Wolf(rejoining stage):Not killing. We all have three stock
Wario: We've been planning this forever though
Bowser: Where is Ike.
The seen flashes back to Ike's plan
Ike: Me and Ness will stay back and come when needed
Link: Not here
Ike comes from above
Ike: Now I am, what do you want
Bowser: to kill you all
A fight began. Link took on Bowser and Fox, Wario
Fox: I'll win this time friend
Mario and Ike stayed back just in case help would be needed. Fox is hurt by Wario, Ike comes in to fight him and knocks him off . Falco appears from above
Falco: Hi Bro's
Link: Falco thank God your here. Kill Bowser.
Falco: OK
Falco knocks Bowser off the stage
Link: Nice Bro. (goes for hi five)
Falco attacks Link
Falco: Get off of me
Link: But...
Falco: But nothing. I'm going to kill you all. Melee characters will prevail. You will all die and they will all come.
Wario and Bowser Reform
Ike attacks Falco. They fight for a few minutes before Falco pins Ike.
Falco: Good-bye friend, Good-bye
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Fox (getting up): what are you doing
Falco: Finishing Ike off
Falco knocks Ike off the stage
Link: IKE!
Mario: I'll go get Luigi. You two fight him
Mario leaves to find Luigi. Fox comes toward Falco.
Fox: STUPID TRADER!
Falco: No, stupid you for believing me
Falco attacks fox and link, almost knocking them. Luigi is back yelling don't trust Falco. Falco easily knocks him off the stage.
Mario(heard not seen): LUIGI!!!!!!!!!!
Luigi(reforming): don't worry I'm ok
Falco: To easy
Falco began to approach link when he heard something from above

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Post  imevil on Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:59 pm

ok, since i know that this is not are first prority and it will take a long time to get made. I think i'll take this somewhere else.

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Post  Nano511 on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:02 pm

but dont forget about it. its good. btw, i think you should try this at machinima.com seeing as i dont think anyone here has that game...

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Post  imevil on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:04 pm

[quote:0db9="Nano511"]but dont forget about it. its good. btw, i think you should try this at machinima.com seeing as i dont think anyone here has that game...[/quote]
yeah! that was the other place iwas taking it. posting thread right after i watch red vs. blue

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Post  Nano511 on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:15 pm

ya know thats a 100 episode series right?

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Post  Guest on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:17 pm

204 episodes in total for red vs blue
ive seen them all =]
atleast 5 times

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Post  Nano511 on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:18 pm

[quote:088d="M0a0t0t"]204 episodes in total for red vs blue
ive seen them all =]
atleast 5 times[/quote]

oh mai gawd. ive only seen reconstruction.

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Post  imevil on Fri Jul 03, 2009 6:21 pm

[quote:b937="Nano511"]ya know thats a 100 episode series right?[/quote]
yup, just noticed. i watched the first two. posted for help though

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Post  Rotnpankake on Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:46 pm

[quote:b390="Nano511"][quote:b390="M0a0t0t"]204 episodes in total for red vs blue
ive seen them all =]
atleast 5 times[/quote]

oh mai gawd. ive only seen reconstruction.[/quote]
reconstruction doesn't even really make sense without seeing the first 100 episodes... the plot is actually REALLY REALLY deep

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