Back To School- Original Script Idea

Well I had this idea that just us (Synyster Sykotik Studios) were going to do but I thought I'd post it here and see what you guys thought.

This is a story about Corey (me :D), Daniel and Jake, along with there friends and enemies to discover the mystery of Machinima. When Daniel discovers Corey writting a Machinima script that seems to be exactly the same as whats happening (IRONY FTW!!), they discover that there script can now write their whole lifes.

[i]P.S. Alot of what happens is what happens in real life in my classes. This is a VERY ROUGH DRAFT. I did it in class in about 10mins.[/i]

Camera pans through scenes of high school

Corey: Welcome to High School, a place where futures are made…

Shows students getting medals.

Corey: And destroyed…

Elite getting t-bagged by six others.

Corey: High school can be hard but with students from all over the world, it never gets boring.

Shows an elite

Corey: That’s me, Corey, let me take you into my world.

Camera zooms forward into a blur.
Shows a classroom with students running riot and making a lot of noise. Teacher walks in.

Teacher: Ok ok quiet down.

Class sits.

Teacher: Ok class, first off welcome to a new year. Now lets do the role. Just answer here for your name. Is there a Mr Homer? A Homer sexual? I’m looking for a Homer sexual!!

Class snickers

Teacher: No? ok. Is there an Anita? Anita Wang (said as in “I need a wang”)? Anita Wang!! You at the back, Anita Wang? Anita Wang at the back? Anita Wang at the front? No? Tsk tsk, poor start to the year guys. Wow this ones a long one, Immahomosexualwholikestolickmyownass (I’m a homosexual who likes to lick my own ass)
Matthew: Haha, he said ass.
Daniel: Haha he said Imma.
Teacher: Ok some how I doubt this is the role. Alota Sex, Biggus Dickus, High Knee? Who has the real role?
Harold: I do sir, some incompetent fool thought that it would be quite humorous to place such vile names on a fake version of such an important document that will go towards our future.

*Corey: That’s Harold, straight A student and never been yelled at by a Teacher in his whole life. You can figure out the rest.

Harold: And furthermore, if this continures….
Teacher: I would have to give you detention, just give it here. Ok this looks better.

Students answer to their names with “here”

Teacher: Harold, Jake, Daniel, Sha’ Niqua, Taragon, Corey, Pharlap, Matthew, Mr Red…
Green Elite: Here
Red Elite: What does this accomplish?
Teacher: Mr Green…
Red Elite: *sigh* Here.
Teacher: Ok now that that’s out of the way, lets start the year with a little Chemistry.

Class sighs
Teacher: I want you to find and explain the Oxidation Number of Cl O2.

Jake: So what did you guys do for the holidays?
Corey: Meh, this and that.

Matthew quickly comes in

Matthew: Oh yeah? Well I had sex twice, got screwed seven times, anal probed by hot alien twins, had sex with my cousin, went to an alternate universe, found myself as a girl, had sex with myself, went to New Zealand, got drunk, found some hot sheep, went to the playboy mansion and got back this morning.
Corey: You did all that in your holidays?
Matthew: No. I did that on the weekend, you wanna know what I did for the holidays?
Corey: No.
Daniel: Well I watched the curtains grow.
Corey: Huh.

Shows Corey, Daniel and Jake

*Corey: This is our group, playing pranks and getting up to no good.

Shows Matthew

*Corey: Matthew wonders between groups, no friends and no enemies. He’s ok, a bit weird at times.

*Shows Harold, Taragon and Pharlap

*Corey: Our arch enemies, the complete opposite of us. Smart, well-behaved. I hate it. Harold is as you saw before, “Teachers little angel”.
Because we only have one girl, Pharlap will go for anyone, if you know what I mean.
Taragon is different though. He’s our friend and a gaming legend, every game he has, he’s finished on every difficulty and every hack, glitch and tactic has been discovered by him. Why he hangs out with the other two, I have no idea.

Shows Stacey

*Corey: Stacey, the ‘cool’ girl. This sounds pathetic but she picks on everyone. You have something she wants, you don’t have it anymore. Daniel has a killer crush on her, he gets all sweaty when he looks at her.

Teacher: And that is the meaning of a square root.
Daniel: Haha he said square root!
Jake: Weren’t we learning about Chemistry? When did it go to square root?
Daniel: HAHA YOU SAID ROOT TOO!!!
Teacher: Ok, come on class, stay with me.
Matthew: Hehe, he said come.
Jake: No, Matt. That’s just too far.

Bell rings
Class gets up to go

Teacher: RECESS!!!!! YEAHHHHH!!!!!!!

Teacher rushes past all the students, meleeing one in the back

END

* = Screen pauses/example/flashback to explain

Written by Corey and Daniel

uuuumm...... ok?this is about your day at school?
uumm..god......i dont know how to put this.......LOL U GOT T-BAGGED: ) : ) : )
no but its a good comedy its only a bit to the short side, too much sex jokes and
i <3 teacher pwning children for the recess lolol

Like I said, I did it in class in about 10mins. The teacher is not like a normal teacher lol. But yeah, alot of it was based off what me, Jake and Daniel do in class. I'll start writting Ep 2.

[quote:ae6e="Synyster Sykotik Studios"]Like I said, I did it in class in about 10mins. The teacher is not like a normal teacher lol. But yeah, alot of it was based off what me, Jake and Daniel do in class. I'll start writting Ep 2.[/quote]

wtf at your school life.
also you should perfect episode 1 before starting episode 2.......

Lol I will perfect this one first. And yeah, I had Chemistry and everything the teacher said came out dirty. He also raced out the room and told us to move our asses so he could go to lunch at the end of class. The holiday thing was done by my friend Jake in his comic.

Dont want to be meen but it wont work

[quote:4184="M0a0t0t"]Dont want to be meen but it wont work[/quote]
Why not? I don't think I've seen someone do this before

Try it if you want, it just wont work

You still didn't say why it won't work. Constructed critisism (don't think thats how you spell it) please.

Just try it and you'll find out

Again your not helping. Whats so bad about it that it'll fail? If you tell me I can make adjustments.

Making real life stuff on halo wont work

[quote:db1d="M0a0t0t"]Making real life stuff on halo wont work[/quote]

You just need to have really good editing skills.

This could be done in HaloCE with a custom school map. I think it would be a whole lot easier in gmod though.

Do it in GMOD and it will be great... i so badly want GMOD


[color:88cb=white]im downloading it with torrents[/color]

Well if we used this idea, you guys could do it in Gmod. I don't care. I was just gonna write the scripts and VA. You already know why I can't BA.

do Gmod defiantly, if you own it or not LOL

Umm.. I've never actually seen or played GMOD. What is it?

Have you played half life 2? it pretty much that with mods and its easier to make machinima

Gmod its the sandbox for all source enginees ( Half-life 2, Tf2, Css, L4d, Etc)

[quote:80b5="M0a0t0t"]Do it in GMOD and it will be great... i so badly want GMOD


[color:80b5=white]im downloading it with torrents[/color][/quote]

It's $10...

Lol sorry I've never played ANY source engines. I have seen Half-Life 2 though.

[quote:2649="Sieabah"][quote:2649="M0a0t0t"]Do it in GMOD and it will be great... i so badly want GMOD


[color:2649=white]im downloading it with torrents[/color][/quote]

It's $10...[/quote]

NO, DONT waste that money! use: (cant tell u lol) =D

[quote:1586="TkShark"][quote:1586="Sieabah"][quote:1586="M0a0t0t"]Do it in GMOD and it will be great... i so badly want GMOD


[color:1586=white]im downloading it with torrents[/color][/quote]

It's $10...[/quote]

NO, DONT waste that money! use: (cant tell u lol) =D[/quote]

Torrenting it doesn't work to well.

I know its illegal and it can give viruses but my parents wont let me buy so its the only way

Lol Got off-topic.

So you think do this in Gmod and have another writer?